tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post3156882127924702450..comments2023-10-29T11:17:47.266-04:00Comments on Scratchpad: Maid In Colombia (three word Wednesday - occur, ragged, tidy)Jay R. Thurstonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-34179417779062656892010-02-21T14:36:44.517-05:002010-02-21T14:36:44.517-05:00Thomma and Stan - Thanks you, I am glad you enjoye...Thomma and Stan - Thanks you, I am glad you enjoyed.<br /><br />b - Thank you for the kind comments. Perhaps Sierra will need to be revisited at a later time to be served a little karma.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-79049183014171852412010-02-20T22:02:30.234-05:002010-02-20T22:02:30.234-05:00Oh please do at least scare the little munchin to ...Oh please do at least scare the little munchin to death...that is why writing is so much fun. Where is the harm? <br /><br />This was really good. I don't say that (and mean it) very often. In this case THIS IS REALLY GOOD means just that. ;)<br /><br />Thank you for stopping by.<br /><br />bb+ (Retire In Style Blog)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05114209481329773753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-29236873650274840552010-02-20T18:45:27.823-05:002010-02-20T18:45:27.823-05:00Great story - contempt given and returned by all -...Great story - contempt given and returned by all - and the girl, Sierra...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-76521881301443790312010-02-20T15:22:54.260-05:002010-02-20T15:22:54.260-05:00Bwahahaha! I enjoyed this. What a romp!Bwahahaha! I enjoyed this. What a romp!Thomma Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12490964079393282131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-31066314200310432802010-02-20T14:51:54.828-05:002010-02-20T14:51:54.828-05:00Thank you everyone for the comments!
- Crystal - ...Thank you everyone for the comments!<br /><br />- Crystal - Glad you enjoyed, and that Sierra came across so unlikeable.<br />- Anthony, Tim, Thom - Thank you, glad you liked the ending.<br />- Dee, Bunny - Poodles are so easy to hate, aren't they? From the ones I have met, they really DO have attitude problems.<br />- Tumblewords, Lissa - Thank you very much!<br />- Peggy - Thank you, I am pleased to have you along for these adventures. The Fifi/Monique/Susan character was a fun head to get inside, those "more than meets the eye" characters are always alluring. Glad you enjoyed the misnomers as well.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-1839548187160309712010-02-20T12:43:28.278-05:002010-02-20T12:43:28.278-05:00interesting, intriguing and a bit of humor mix in,...interesting, intriguing and a bit of humor mix in, nice joblissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-22331994221722345732010-02-19T11:45:26.150-05:002010-02-19T11:45:26.150-05:00Dark humor, this is. Loved the twist at the end.Dark humor, this is. Loved the twist at the end.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-88822942188396567212010-02-19T02:27:00.338-05:002010-02-19T02:27:00.338-05:00The 'fifi' and 'shakira' names got...The 'fifi' and 'shakira' names got me. <br /><br />I like how when I read one of your stories, I feel like I am traveling and finding adventure. You did a good job at getting inside your protagonists head too.pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-90475933785216513592010-02-19T00:11:07.509-05:002010-02-19T00:11:07.509-05:00Terrific read!Terrific read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-53736625488259272702010-02-18T23:52:53.757-05:002010-02-18T23:52:53.757-05:00This was funny and definitely brought a smile to m...This was funny and definitely brought a smile to my face. Maybe she should off the daughter and the dog together...?Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-38582538462842868472010-02-18T22:46:21.585-05:002010-02-18T22:46:21.585-05:00Loved this except that I would start with the dog ...Loved this except that I would start with the dog as long as we are killing. Snotty little poodle needs to be taken out! She could accidentally hold her little nose under the water a skosh too long?Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-14501554528367997592010-02-18T15:26:11.632-05:002010-02-18T15:26:11.632-05:00I never saw that one coming in the end!... Awesome...I never saw that one coming in the end!... Awesome work Jay.<br /><br />-TimTimothy P. Remphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04422296532550497806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-72003705501567515332010-02-18T10:19:08.031-05:002010-02-18T10:19:08.031-05:00Another good story, and I always like your endings...Another good story, and I always like your endings.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-51770604931588200982010-02-18T10:13:29.025-05:002010-02-18T10:13:29.025-05:00I love this. This is something I would both read ...I love this. This is something I would both read and write. Great idea and wonderful story telling. I really want her to kill the daughter, too. Thanks for sharing!Crystal Phareshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881609059618148820noreply@blogger.com