tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post4544284555052998564..comments2023-10-29T11:17:47.266-04:00Comments on Scratchpad: Meeting Savannah (3 word Wednesday - ideal, measure, teeter)Jay R. Thurstonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-4033080852629194082010-01-25T22:57:02.154-05:002010-01-25T22:57:02.154-05:00I want to believe! Scully! Great job with the 3W...I want to believe! Scully! Great job with the 3WW, I loved it! :0)J. S. Clawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18199974452998250456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-79114499927891700242010-01-23T07:23:33.735-05:002010-01-23T07:23:33.735-05:00Well done!
tattoos, race car, mobile oil and book...Well done!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/01/tattoos-race-care-mobile-oil-and-book.html" rel="nofollow">tattoos, race car, mobile oil and book</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-35601508463212501542010-01-23T06:58:18.239-05:002010-01-23T06:58:18.239-05:00loved it - go Savannah :)loved it - go Savannah :)Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-34140676743177023202010-01-22T13:30:21.158-05:002010-01-22T13:30:21.158-05:00Definately a good read! Never underestimate those ...Definately a good read! Never underestimate those who you don't understand!<br /><br /><a href="http://wordvamp.blogspot.com/2010/01/never-centered.html" rel="nofollow">Never Centered</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-41141919472847207672010-01-21T22:45:07.333-05:002010-01-21T22:45:07.333-05:00Thank you everyone once again for the positive com...Thank you everyone once again for the positive comments.<br /><br />Tom and Peggy - I agree with the need for some editing, after stepping away from it and rereading the piece, there were parts that read more like a draft than a final product. I am glad Savannah's voice came out correctly, it was a little more challenging getting inside her head as this was my first attempt at highlighting both a female, and a teenager. I am pleased also that her "strong" and "snarkiness" traits translated clearly to the reader.Jay R. Thurstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-47291366264484608222010-01-21T16:42:58.419-05:002010-01-21T16:42:58.419-05:00Jason. The voice is right for Savannah. Great us...Jason. The voice is right for Savannah. Great use of this week's words; I'll have to reread to find "ideal". <br /><br />You have an innate ability at storytelling, and you definitely draw the reader into the story from the first paragraph. As Thom said, some editing would make the story absolutely sparkle.<br /><br />Keep writing, you have talent.pegjethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-71073621697270729452010-01-21T01:32:17.891-05:002010-01-21T01:32:17.891-05:00a very good read :)
Uncountablea very good read :)<br /><br /><a href="http://fart-in-a-jar.blogspot.com/2010/01/uncountable.html" rel="nofollow">Uncountable</a>Americanising Desihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-90084198580644890202010-01-21T00:08:56.173-05:002010-01-21T00:08:56.173-05:00I like her! She's a keeper.I like her! She's a keeper.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-27967665465267705722010-01-20T23:41:00.540-05:002010-01-20T23:41:00.540-05:00Nice oneNice oneJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-37116691421005118982010-01-20T22:09:32.823-05:002010-01-20T22:09:32.823-05:00Very good read! Savannah's character stood out...Very good read! Savannah's character stood out very strongly, and I liked her snarkiness. I'd definitely like to know what happens next...Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-39570108451527894692010-01-20T17:57:18.922-05:002010-01-20T17:57:18.922-05:00Phew, Savannah is a strong character, and with her...Phew, Savannah is a strong character, and with her psychic ability...Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-34343147151104970292010-01-20T17:14:37.235-05:002010-01-20T17:14:37.235-05:00This built really well and it's a great idea. ...This built really well and it's a great idea. I think it could use a little tighter edit, but it is nearly spot-on.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-790808303699616550.post-30816429610012226612010-01-20T17:14:11.589-05:002010-01-20T17:14:11.589-05:00A different kind of law enforcement. Nicely done.A different kind of law enforcement. Nicely done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com